This advice is intended for students who need to write-up an experiment for a class. I’ve listed some brief thoughts on what should go into the various sections of a laboratory write-up and added tips that will hopefully please your Type A teacher. But don’t just follow the advice here: you also need to find yourself an example article from the primary literature so that you have something to emulate. Don’t skip this step, because the idea behind a write-up is that you are producing a document that could be submitted to a journal for publication. You probably won’t end up doing that (no offense), but understanding the process of science and the format of submission will help you write better. So go to the library and browse a journal that has primary literature, or download an article by searching Google Scholar. Search for something fun, like, “cats, fur balls, vomit” … something that you wouldn’t mind reading a science paper on. Pay special attention to how they pitch the question. You want your write-up to be based on a burning question, too, even if you were forced to do the experiment.
Here’s what it should look like when printed out. You ideally want to replace the “blah, blah, blah” with more persuasive text.
- Should convey the “issue,” the approach, and the system (organism).
- Format with sentence-style capitalization (i.e., capitalize the first letter of the first word, and nothing else. Some Journals Still Put Titles in Title Case or EVEN ALL CAPS, but I think those two formats are archaic and dying. Center on the title page.
- Avoid crafting titles with colons: I think they are overused. But it’s not the end of the world if you end up with a coloned title.
- Provide your name, institution, address, e-mail, and telephone and fax numbers below the title.
- The abstract is a miniature version of your paper, and might have a single sentence that summarizes each of the major sections (Introduction, Materials and methods, Results, Discussion) of your paper … but you can make it have one or two additional sentences if needed.
- Begin the abstract at the top of page 1, just underneath the title. It’s usually OK to single space the Abstract (the rest of the manuscript can be double spaced).
- The first sentence should attempt to interest the reader in the issue. It is useful to imagine a reader who is predisposed to be uninterested in your topic, and thus imagine it is your job to convince him/her otherwise.
- Describe the general approach utilized to address your hypothesis on the issue.
- Summarize the main results briefly but without using statistical support (e.g., don’t give p-values and such).
- Conclude with a general statement about the importance of the study, answering the question, Why should anyone care? (Don’t include that as question, by the way…it’s just your unwritten quest.)
- Aim for 3-5 paragraphs, and aim for a general audience that is educated in your general field but not necessarily familiar with your question or approach. It is best to imagine a reader who is both busy and easily bored. Most people are.
- Get your reader excited about the issue or question while using the absolute minimum of background information and definitions. The introduction is not a place to “review” all the relevant literature. If you really want to do that, write a review paper. Similarly, don’t craft sentences that only define terms. Every sentence should be written to help persuade the reader that something is interesting and not fully understood: you are introducing the question.
- Convince the reader that the experiment has not been published previously. There are invariably articles that come close, but you should persuade reader that they don’t fully address the issue.
- Pitch a hypothesis. This is your opinion of what you think explains this or that.
- Provide a description the general experimental approach that will give you the data to address your hypothesis.
- When citing published literature, use the “Name-Year” system. For example (Darwin 1859). You do not need a comma after “Darwin” and you do not need a page number. When you are citing several sources at once, arrange them chronologically and separate them by a comma (Darwin 1860, Jones 1861).
Materials and methods
- Describe experimental equipment and methods so that another laboratory could (1) find or make the reagents/equipment, (2) repeat your techniques, and (3) follow the same statistical approach.
- Describe the source (e.g., collection locality with latitude and longitude; company; colleague) and relevant characteristics (e.g., size, age, sex, genotype) of the biological material used.
- Include a description of experimental as well as control treatments, with number of replicates.
- Indicate, in parentheses, the manufacturer of specific reagents and equipment (e.g., item C0750, Sigma Chemicals, St. Louis).
- Capitalize copyrighted names (e.g., Petri dish, Parafilm, Tween, Eppendorf, Clorox).
- Include information about location, day length, and (laboratory) temperature when relevant.
- Include photograph or drawing of experimental set-up if needed.
- Fully describe all statistical analyses that were used and how they allowed you to address the hypothesis. Be specific about what the tests do. E.g., “Means were compared with a Student’s t-test.”
- Indicate software package used (but only in parentheses); add the software’s author(s) to literature cited section.
- You do not need to specify which program you used for graphing. You also do not need to specify the program you used collect data (Microsoft Excel, e.g.) or the word processing program.
- Use the past tense throughout (e.g., “the data were collected”).
- Avoid using words that reveal that the manuscript is the result of a class assignment. E.g., don’t use words like class, student, laboratory partner, professor.
- Use the metric system (cm, g, 56 °C). Yes, even if you live in the backwards United States.
- First mention whether experimental protocol actually worked (e.g., “90 percent of the birds survived the experimental treatments”), then describe further qualitative results if possible.
- Inform the reader of any ignored data or “runs” that would otherwise alter conclusions (i.e., have you chosen, improperly, to present the only run out of 10 that showed a significant result?).
- In another paragraph, begin presentation of data analysis that more specifically addresses your hypothesis.
- Include leading zeros on all numbers with values less than 1 (e.g., p = 0.034).
- Include spaces before and after “=” to improve readability of statistics (e.g., p = 0.023).
- Opt for figures whenever possible. Tables put readers to sleep.
- Refer to figures and tables parenthetically. For example, write “…the mean running speed of rats on fire was higher than that of control rats (t = 23.84, p < 0.0005, df = 19; figure 7a)”.
- Use significant, correlated, and normal according to their statistical meanings.
- Avoid discussion of the results in this section.
- Make your graphs look really nice.
- Craft figure legends that stand on their own. A figure legend should be able to convey the general result to a reader if the reader were to look at figures only.
Label both axes of charts using sentence-style capitalization (e.g., “Mean running speed (m/s)”).
Remove extraneous boxes, tick-marks, lines, and symbols in graphs. Rarely should you be satisfied with the “default” graphs of standard charting software.
Figure captions (=legends) for graphs should not contain “Results” sentences. I.e., do not give statistics in your captions. If you really, really, want to give readers a sense of statistical results, then put some asterisks or p-values directly onto the graph, perhaps accompanied by arrows. Then you could say, in the caption, “asterisks refer to post-hoc tests” (or whatever).
Include sample sizes in figure legends.
- Remind (without sounding like you are reminding) the reader of hypothesis and results, and quickly state whether your hypothesis was supported.
- Discuss why your results are conclusive and interesting. Be sure to convince the reader, not just yourself.
- Lead the reader through the logic of all of your conclusions. Your reader is probably smart, but everyone enjoys an article that lays out thinking explicitly.
- State relevance of your findings to other published work. Assume it’s out there, even if you’re mentor doesn’t know about it.
- State relevance to real world.
- Detail future directions that are possible, especially experiments that could expand or confirm your conclusions. (Repeating the experiment with a larger sample size is too boring of a future experiment, however.)
- Do not use p-values and t-values, and do not refer to figures or tables in this section.
- Thank individuals for specific contributions to project (e.g., equipment donation, statistical advice, laboratory assistance, editorial comments on earlier versions).
- Mention the individuals, companies, programs, and government agencies that have provided funding.
- Be sincere but do not lapse too much into informality.
- Include people’s names only, using abbreviations for first names (e.g., C. Darwin). Omit titles such as professor, Writing Associate, Mrs., and Dr.
- Follow format described by The Council of Science Editors. E.g., if you have cited a scholarly article in a journal, then you go this site and click on the “article in a scholarly journal” link, and it will tell you exactly how to format the citation. Use initials for first and middle names of authors.
- Include all authors’ names for multi-authored papers.
- Format titles of articles in sentence case. Note that many journals use “Title Case” for journal article titles … but you should not copy that style when including a citation.
- Spell out journal names fully.
- Web citations for research results and facts are undesirable. In most of the cases there is primary literature that can be used, and you should go to great efforts to find this literature. Search obscure databases for research in other languages, contact researchers for leads on literature, consult yellowing books on topic, etc.
- Note that most journals are available online. But if you read an article on your computer, you should site the article as a journal article, not as a web site.
- Cite only sources that you have actually read. Reading only the abstract of an article (e.g., on an online database of primary literature) does not qualify.
- Do not use text quotations in scientific writing, even if you have been allowed to do this in other science courses or in high school. Rephrase with your own words.
- Make absolutely sure that you have properly attributed others’ ideas and facts. Using phrases from your source material without quotations is plagiarism even if you cite the source at the end of the sentence. Mixing your own words with short fragments from your sources is called “patchwork plagiarism.”
- Check for spelling errors with spell-checking software and by rereading manuscript manually (to catch “their/there” and related errors).
- Include page numbers at the bottom of all pages.
- Refer to your experiments and all cited experiments in the past tense.
- Attempt to vary sentence length to improve readability.
- Make sure all sentences fit logically within a paragraph, and that all paragraphs belong in the order that they appear. Take great care to use linking phrases between paragraphs so that your reader knows why a new paragraph has been started.
- Italicize the Latin binomials of all organisms (e.g., Cuscuta salina).
- After you have introduced the species’ scientific name, refer to it thereafter in an abbreviated form to conserve space (e.g., C. salina).
- Fully spell out the genus name when a sentence begins with a scientific name, even if you have introduced the beast earlier in the manuscript.
- Use a serif font (e.g., Palatino, Times) for your text and tables. Non-serif fonts (e.g., Helvetica, Verdana) are fine, indeed desirable, for figures.
- Delete any ext ra spaces within and __between words, especially before and after italicized text.
- Pair all instances of data with plural verbs. Datum is the singular. You therefore should write, “data are”, never “data is.” It is of course true that many people, including some scientists, often say “data is”, but the frequency of the error does not make it less of an error.
- Use “whether” and “if” appropriately. “If” means “in the event that” (a hypothetical scenario) and is rarely the appropriate word in scientific writing. Many mentors don’t know this, so educate him/her if you get push-back on this.
- Use “that” to specify a particular item. “Which” is used when you want to provide information that is not absolutely critical in defining the previous phrase of the sentence.
- Use “because” to indicate causality (e.g., “the cat purred because she was being fed”). Use “since” to indicate a timing issue (e.g., “the cat had not purred since the tragic boating accident in July”).
- Use “e.g.” (which is generally italicized because it is a foreign word, but not here because italics looks awful on the web) when you want to provide an example. Use “i.e.” when you want to rephrase (i.e., to state more explicitly). These abbreviations are not interchangeable.
- Keep your manuscript free of slang, cliches, and contractions.
- Avoid, when possible, the ambiguous words “their,” “they,” “it,” and “this.”
- Avoid using “etc.” Instead opt for more complete listings of items.
- “Et cetera” is abbreviated “etc.” I feel foolish saying that, but it’s a common mistake (many people pronounce it “eck cetera”, incorrectly).
- Resist the trend of using “woman” as an adjective. E.g., write, “female scientist” instead of “woman scientist.” If you can’t resist the trend, at least be consistent and write, “man scientist.”
- If you don’t know the difference between “effect” and “affect,” then never, ever use either of those words. For a great explanation of the difference, see The Oatmeal’s “10 words you need to stop misspelling” (scroll down to appropriate section).
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- “How to write a paper in scientific journal style and format” (Greg Anderson at Bates College writes really well and has good opinions on everything)
- Writing scientific papers (Colby College)
- How to write a research paper (Rice University)
- Suggestions for writers (William Cronin)
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